My family move to new house last weekend,because my young sister-in-law came to U.S.A last month. My brother want to live together with family should we found a new house, I thing this is a nice house for me,because it have four room and has a large back yard, my Mom can plant everything her want.Yesterday my Mom bought one plant I thing that is rose and today before I went to school I water plants it, I thing it has new life in my house.
Now my house has a lot of grass for front yard and back yard should we want to buy cropper grass, my brother and I went to Sea looked around but we didn't find cropper grass use electric because my Mom want to buy it, everything use gas. My brother said "I thing we were buy this cropper grass use gas is better" I said "ok" and we bought it go home.When my Mom see this machine use gas she revile us, my brother explain this machine is better and she said "it ok".
We are very happy but I has a little sad because when I go to school everyday has a traffic and so far compare when I live in Oakland, but it ok because we have new life for new house very happy.
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My family move to new house last weekend,because my young sister-in-law came to U.S.A last month. My brother want to live together with family should we found a new house, I thing this is a nice house for me,because it have four room and has a large back yard, my Mom can plant everything her want.Yesterday my Mom bought one plant I thing that is rose and today before I went to school I water plants it, I thing it has new life in my house.
Now my house has a lot of grass for front yard and back yard should we want to buy cropper grass, my brother and I went to Sea looked around but we didn't find cropper grass use electric because my Mom want to buy it, everything use gas. My brother said "I thing we were buy this cropper grass use gas is better" I said "ok" and we bought it go home.When my Mom see this machine use gas she revile us, my brother explain this machine is better and she said "it ok".
We are very happy but I has a little sad because when I go to school everyday has a traffic and so far compare when I live in Oakland, but it ok because we have new life for new house very happy.
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My family moved to new house last weekend because my young sister-in-law came to the United States last month. My brother wanted to live together with our family if we could find a large enough house.
I think this is a nice house for us because there are four bedrooms and a large back yard. My mom can plant anything she wants. Yesterday my mom bought one plant. I think that it is a rose and today, before I went to school, I watered it. I think it brings new life to our house.
Now, our house has a lot of grass in the front yard and back yard. We needed to buy a lawn mower so my brother and I went to Sears and looked around but we didn't find an electric lawn mower. My mom wanted to buy an electric mower but everything used gas.
My brother said, "I think we should buy a gas mower. They are better."
I said, "OK" and we bought it and went home.
When my Mom saw that this machine used gas she reprimanded us. My brother explained that gas powered machines were better and mom said "It isOK."
We are very happy but I am a little sad because when I go to school everyday there is a traffic compared to when I lived in Oakland, but it ok because we have new life in a new house and we are very happy.
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