I feel the United states's public security is so bad. Yesterday,the nearest my house's bus stop had a robbery. although I haven't seen that,but I feel had to importance to this.
I feel the United state's government must to importance to this. This morning,I went to bus stop to take the bus,and then I arrived at the bus stop. Suddenly,a old man and her grandson said hello for me, and then he asked me "Did you take the bus at 2:40 yesterday",I said "NO", the old man said"yesterday,this bus stop had a robbery. two black people rob a chinese people,they put the chinese people's back on the step and kick it,suddenly a Mexico people arrived the bus stop and he said "call 911",the black peole heard this ,they ran away. but before that, the black people even want to rob the old man,the old man went to other way.
I hope the united states's public security can better than now.
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I feel the United states's public security is so bad. Yesterday,the nearest my house's bus stop had a robbery. although I haven't seen that,but I feel had to importance to this.
I feel the United state's government must to importance to this. This morning,I went to bus stop to take the bus,and then I arrived at the bus stop. Suddenly,a old man and her grandson said hello for me, and then he asked me "Did you take the bus at 2:40 yesterday",I said "NO", the old man said"yesterday,this bus stop had a robbery. two black people rob a chinese people,they put the chinese people's back on the step and kick it,suddenly a Mexico people arrived the bus stop and he said "call 911",the black peole heard this ,they ran away. but before that, the black people even want to rob the old man,the old man went to other way.
I hope the united states's public security can better than now.
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I feel that public safety in the United States is very bad.
Yesterday there was a robbery at the bus stop nearest to my house. Although I didn’t see the robbery, I feel that safety is important.
I feel the government of the United States should consider safety important, also
This morning, I went to that bus stop to take the bu and then I arrived at the bus stop. an old man and his grandson said hello to me. Then the old man asked me, "Did you take the bus at 2:40 yesterday?"
I said, "No."
The old man said, "Yesterday, there was a robbery at this bus stop. Two black men robbed a Chinese man. They put the Chinese guy down and kicked him. A Mexicican man arrived at the bus stop and he said, "I am calling 911!"
The black men heard this and they ran away, but before that, the black people even tried to rob the old man. The old man went the other way.
I hope that public safety in the United States will be better than it is now.
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